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Sweet dreams sweetheart,
dream sweet while we're apart.
I'll hold you tight another day,
your eyes are gettin' heavy anyway,
so lay your head against my shoulder,
you've all your life for acting older.
And to help you not to cry...
This lullaby:

This lullaby my dear,
sweet lull-a-bye for now,
A kiss from me to dry that tear,
Sorrow I cannot allow
so to help you not to cry...
this lullaby.

Rest now, Sunshine.
The moon knows you are mine.
I'll hold you with the greatest care,
and in the morning I'll be there.
I'll stay here 'til your breath is steady,
I won't let go until you're ready
and before I say goodbye...
This lullaby:

This lullaby my dear,
sweet lull-a-bye for now,
A kiss from me to dry that tear,
Sorrow I cannot allow
so to help you not to cry...
this lullaby.
like the title says, this a lullaby. the lyrics and music are original, written by yours truly *smile* I've been fine-tuning the piano music for a couple days now, and I'm actually rather pleased with the results.
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likexsummerxrain Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
May I use this for a fanfiction, i'm trying to find good lullabies and i really like this one
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
If you will credit where you found it, and link me to the piece that you are using it in, I see no reason why not. ^___^
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likexsummerxrain Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks, I still haven't posted it. it's still in my math notebook xD (Where i was gonna put the lullaby i put -insert lullaby here xD)
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willowsilverstone Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2009
are you ever gonna upload it with music anywhere!?!
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Equus1 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love lullabies, and you did a great job with this one :) I wish I could hear the music
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Professional General Artist
*smile* I'm glad that you enjoy it; it was truly a work from the heart.
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TwelveStep Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006
This is just about the sweetest thing I've ever seen.

You play piano!? ME TOO!
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2006  Professional General Artist
*smile* I'm glad you like it. I'll send you the recording once I finally get the music chisled out of the composer's block that it's immersed in.
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TwelveStep Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2006
:w00t:
That's exciting.
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2006  Professional General Artist
*smile* I'm glad you think so!
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TwelveStep Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2006
:nod:
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pilas14 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2006
My song!! You were at my house when you uploaded it and I'm still not the first comment! >< lol!! Love it darling. I can't wait to hear the music. :)
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2006  Professional General Artist
*smile* its gettin' to the finishing point! much love! :hug:
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pilas14 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2006
Why are you on the computer babe?
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006  Professional General Artist
'cause I just missed you so much I had to get in touch! :hug:
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pilas14 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006
Free hug! :hug:
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006  Professional General Artist
NINJA HUGZORZ!!!!! :hug:
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pilas14 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006
:hug: Oh thank you darling one! :) I love you. :heart:
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006  Professional General Artist
NINJA HUGZORZ!!!!! :hug:
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kitkatfox Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2006
I can't hear the music...but I'm sure it's fantastic! I like the lyrics though.
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2006  Professional General Artist
*smile* I'll be sure to play it for you some time.
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Thorvold Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good. I like the overall feel to it. Very nicely done. Do I need to ask if this is written with anyone in mind?

There is one thing I'd change, if it works with the music of course. I'd drop the word "anyway" from the end og the fourth line of the first stanza (is that what its called?) and end on "heavy."
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2006  Professional General Artist
it was written with my dearest love pilas14 (Carley) in mind. right now, the anyway fills in with the music (makes sense when you hear it, goes from half notes in the first line to eight notes by that line) but I can try it both ways. *smile* thanks for taking the time to comment!
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Thorvold Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought the "anyway" might fit with the music. When you're done with it post it or give a link. I'd be interested in hearing it.
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006  Professional General Artist
*smile* I'll be sure to. I'm also thinking of posting up the sheet music once I have it polished out.
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Thorvold Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't read music, but my son can, at least guitar music. I'll just wait for the MTV debut.
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Spiderwriter Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006  Professional General Artist
*smile* I'll see if I can figure out a way to record it.
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